Learning Intention; to write a recount with the correct format.
The blimps were rising slowly above our heads while we had to stand in the cold. “No wonder they always worry about their safety before they take off, they rely on a bloon” No one laughed and Jordan left embarrassed. Me, Marcus followed him out and he boarded a blimp parked next to the shed so I ran and grabbed the rope from the blimp and then hopped on and grasped onto his arm and tugged him off the blimp he tried to start a brawl and I walked backwards into the shed and through the crowd, Jordan was on the lookout.
I began heading to the other side of the shed to escape and got stood up by guards wondering why I’m in a rush, I had to tell a white lie that I won’t regret. Outside and up high were lots of blimps hovering over the large lake with thousands of people below. The blimps were moving down slowly then speeding up, “Engines losing fuel at the same time?” I knew something wasn’t right. Black liquid begins to pour from almost every blimp. Looking thick, and appears to be petrol. Slowly dropping the blimp riders screaming out at the control panel workers but they’ve been sabotaged, everyone starts to evacuate, Jordan comes around a corner tied up with a gun to his head. I thought of being a hero but i’m too much of a wimp.
Clenching on the trigger, the man in black holding Jordan threw him on the wet grass and began kicking him in the ribs and stomping his back. I ran behind the side of the shed and grabbed an old rusted pole leaning against it. Stealthily I walked around the whole shed and swung the pole at the man abusing Jordan, when he was on the ground I jump on him with my knees and I was sure he was out cold. I got up and unnecessarily wiped my chest like in those old movies. I walked towards Jordan and picked him up and untied him.
One of the blimps touched with the water and sank under all I could think of is if the poor man was alive, Then I could see someone just bloop out of the water and then I cheered with myself like I’m a loner. 10 to 15 minutes later all the blimps began to fall and the police arrived I wasn’t sure how police heard about this problem, My only guess was that one of the bystanders called before they left. The police quickly hopped out of their cars and one cop went so quick out his car he tripped on the side of the car and hit his face, I tried my best not to laugh. The cops quickly grabbed the man in black and threw him straight into handcuffs then pushed him in the car and thanked me because they must have thought I called, I took it anyway. The cops left with sirens on high volume. Police helicopters flew in and hovered over the water with a ladder hanging down and collected the struggling blimp riders out of the water. I walked of like in a dramatic movie but my shoelaces were untied and I tripped up. I eventually made it to my car and left.
It was an intense feeling and I’m glad it’s all over, though Jordan wasn’t the best person around I still cared when he got attacked. I hope I never experience anything that graphic again.
